Well it's not boring. Your storyline is nice. But it lacks more interaction between the main characters and a bit of romance. Try adding sweet moments between the main characters like fl caring for mls or vice versa. It will add element to your story. But don't worry, everyone have their own way of writing. You can write to your convenience.☺️I like it anyway. And sorry if anyhow my words hurt you. 😟😓
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Moon🌼
Well it's not boring. Your storyline is nice. But it lacks more interaction between the main characters and a bit of romance. Try adding sweet moments between the main characters like fl caring for mls or vice versa. It will add element to your story.
But don't worry, everyone have their own way of writing. You can write to your convenience.☺️I like it anyway.
And sorry if anyhow my words hurt you. 😟😓
2021-08-26
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