I see a Silva verse Sebastián knock out fight coming. *sip tea *
2021-05-14
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Yasmeen
The of stroy is simple “Mh mommy dad" but seems to me that we are know about the MC's >Their family>Their family friend's MCs> their friends> The family of the friends. The neighbours and the line goes on.... Phew...I have a very bad memory.. Try to keep the characters short and sweet... But I love your story..
2021-05-14
1
Yasmeen
Author I truly truly truly love your stroy, there is no doubt about that... But there are TOOO MANY Character.... And remembering them is the hardest task... I read to enjoy the story not to remember All the unwanted characters..
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Sheena Mims
I see a Silva verse Sebastián knock out fight coming. *sip tea *
2021-05-14
4
Yasmeen
The of stroy is simple “Mh mommy dad" but seems to me that we are know about the
MC's >Their family>Their family friend's
MCs> their friends> The family of the friends.
The neighbours and the line goes on....
Phew...I have a very bad memory..
Try to keep the characters short and sweet...
But I love your story..
2021-05-14
1
Yasmeen
Author I truly truly truly love your stroy, there is no doubt about that...
But there are TOOO MANY Character.... And remembering them is the hardest task...
I read to enjoy the story not to remember All the unwanted characters..
2021-05-14
2