well author.... I've free advice for you 🤗🤗 instead of giving it a title as "THE DARK OBSESSION OF THE MAFIA" why don't you rename it something like "SWEET LOVE OF MAFIA KING" or something just like that coz the story now what ur writing doesn't suit the title you have given.... well.........if you have idea of Leonardo being darkly obsessed with Sophia later in the story then it's k 😄😄😄
2021-07-02
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lumi_2501
I want to see her as LEONARDO's bride...😚😚
"Crossing your border line for her...!? and you say you don't love her?" These lines hits differently...🙂🙂
2021-07-01
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😴✨ STARRY 🌟 NÏGHT ✨💥
I feel touched that I need SOMEBODY 🥺 Somebody to know ❤️ Somebody to have ❤️ Somebody to hold ❤️ It's easy to say🤧 But it's never the same 😥 I guess I kinda liked the way you numbed all the pain 😭💔🎶
I just write what I feel so emotional 🥀 I really really really really really like you and the story ☺️❤️😘
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well author.... I've free advice for you 🤗🤗
instead of giving it a title as "THE DARK OBSESSION OF THE MAFIA" why don't you rename it something like "SWEET LOVE OF MAFIA KING" or something just like that coz the story now what ur writing doesn't suit the title you have given....
well.........if you have idea of Leonardo being darkly obsessed with Sophia later in the story then it's k 😄😄😄
2021-07-02
4
lumi_2501
I want to see her as LEONARDO's bride...😚😚
"Crossing your border line for her...!?
and you say you don't love her?"
These lines hits differently...🙂🙂
2021-07-01
4
😴✨ STARRY 🌟 NÏGHT ✨💥
I feel touched that I need SOMEBODY 🥺
Somebody to know ❤️
Somebody to have ❤️
Somebody to hold ❤️
It's easy to say🤧
But it's never the same 😥
I guess I kinda liked the way you numbed all the pain 😭💔🎶
I just write what I feel so emotional 🥀 I really really really really really like you and the story ☺️❤️😘
2021-07-01
3