I can't believe Shishi was the actual villain!! I'm disgusted by her!! This is such a good twist and this episode was emotional at the same time. The way you delivered the emotions for the characters however felt a little bit rushed and there were some grammatical mistakes but don't worry you can improve bit by bit. I love the story.
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-08
1
Okay I officially hate Shishi (ʘᴗʘ✿)🔪🔪🔪 And Wah Suli was innocent, she didn't poison Wei, She shouldn't have died ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ Everyone died Whyyyyy This chapter was okay I Think. Guess it was too rushed and emotionless, so that's the drawback. Vocab and Grammar can be enhanced as well. But don't be discouraged, you just have to be bit more better and it'll be great-o. — G, Reader from MTN Community
2021-09-08
1
Hale💤MTN
First of all ,That disgusting shishi literally killed everyone!! Now The story is really interesting but try to out more feelings like express the feelings of the characters more that way the readers will be able to imagine the story in their head . looking forward to next chapter
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Zack_Mtn(r)
I can't believe Shishi was the actual villain!! I'm disgusted by her!! This is such a good twist and this episode was emotional at the same time. The way you delivered the emotions for the characters however felt a little bit rushed and there were some grammatical mistakes but don't worry you can improve bit by bit. I love the story.
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-08
1
Okay I officially hate Shishi (ʘᴗʘ✿)🔪🔪🔪 And Wah Suli was innocent, she didn't poison Wei, She shouldn't have died ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ Everyone died Whyyyyy
This chapter was okay I Think. Guess it was too rushed and emotionless, so that's the drawback. Vocab and Grammar can be enhanced as well. But don't be discouraged, you just have to be bit more better and it'll be great-o.
— G, Reader from MTN Community
2021-09-08
1
Hale💤MTN
First of all ,That disgusting shishi literally killed everyone!! Now The story is really interesting but try to out more feelings like express the feelings of the characters more that way the readers will be able to imagine the story in their head . looking forward to next chapter
reader from MTN
2021-09-07
1