I just can't help but laugh because of Suzy. This story is really great and I love your plots and characters as well. However I hope you can enhance your grammar and dialogues so that the story will be more interesting.. I enjoyed reading this story a lot..
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-08
1
Hale💤MTN
well done .It was long and nice chapter! Bad lu mad our Suzy work hard. Anyways story is really interesting. but Somewhere I didn't feel much attractive so try to garnish the dialogues more
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Zack_Mtn(r)
I just can't help but laugh because of Suzy. This story is really great and I love your plots and characters as well. However I hope you can enhance your grammar and dialogues so that the story will be more interesting.. I enjoyed reading this story a lot..
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-08
1
Hale💤MTN
well done .It was long and nice chapter! Bad lu mad our Suzy work hard. Anyways story is really interesting. but Somewhere I didn't feel much attractive so try to garnish the dialogues more
reader from MTN
2021-09-07
0