poor ophra.. Naomi didn't recognise him ʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ Also I like the way you expressed the character's emotions and thoughts.. A job well done author 👏
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-08
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Lol Poor Ophra felt betrayed, he wasn't recognised ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ The Glenn guy looks crazy ←_← Has a murderous vibe one second ago then smiles brightly like a star, I don't trust this →_→ Two or three typos, apart from that chapter went well. Great-o job nes — G, Reader from MTN Community
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Zack_Mtn(r)
poor ophra.. Naomi didn't recognise him ʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ Also I like the way you expressed the character's emotions and thoughts.. A job well done author 👏
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-08
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Lol Poor Ophra felt betrayed, he wasn't recognised ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ The Glenn guy looks crazy ←_← Has a murderous vibe one second ago then smiles brightly like a star, I don't trust this →_→
Two or three typos, apart from that chapter went well. Great-o job nes
— G, Reader from MTN Community
2021-09-04
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𝖑𝖊𝖓𝖟_𝖉𝖐_Killer
Update more lazy busy author
2021-08-30
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