woah.. Suzie did a good job actually and I hope her own ship will sail smoothly as well.. I wonder what will happen next?? Overall the story is amazing.. You have used the plots well and even the way you expressed every character's emotions were incredible. Everything is fine and it's a lovely story.. Keep it up author!!
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-08
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Suzie has one job, Ship everyone. Sometimes it makes my blood boil in anger too 🔪 But in the end it seems she created a good opportunity for herself and Ryan ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ What will happen next? Summarising it up, The story is brilliant. Loved the plot, The genres are also maintained throughout. Writing style and fluidity are two commendable aspects. Typos, Skipped words, grammatical errors are the only noticeable errors. But they are also very less, so it didn't effect the story lot. For achieving perfection, That can be modified and viola done. A masterpiece is made. Best of luck! (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ — G, Reader from MTN Community
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Zack_Mtn(r)
woah.. Suzie did a good job actually and I hope her own ship will sail smoothly as well..
I wonder what will happen next??
Overall the story is amazing.. You have used the plots well and even the way you expressed every character's emotions were incredible. Everything is fine and it's a lovely story.. Keep it up author!!
~Reader from MTN community
2021-09-08
0
Suzie has one job, Ship everyone. Sometimes it makes my blood boil in anger too 🔪 But in the end it seems she created a good opportunity for herself and Ryan ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ What will happen next?
Summarising it up, The story is brilliant. Loved the plot, The genres are also maintained throughout. Writing style and fluidity are two commendable aspects. Typos, Skipped words, grammatical errors are the only noticeable errors. But they are also very less, so it didn't effect the story lot. For achieving perfection, That can be modified and viola done. A masterpiece is made. Best of luck! (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
— G, Reader from MTN Community
2021-09-04
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okay so perbert world is starting-
2021-09-01
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