nice first chap, cant wait for more! do you happen to have any social media or fan page i can follow? :)
2022-06-24
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PurpleChibis are awsome!
Love the title, its soo good looking. Id suggest a couple things though. First, can you see if you can paste what the characters look like? As in an image of them? Not comic wise per se but just give is readers as a heads up on what the characters look like in a bigger sense?
Second off, dont use a chat box and do quotes. I get it but it rather confuses me as to whats going on. Just write without the blurb on whats going on
Third off you need to introduce your characters. I have no idea who is who is master and all. But the first episodes very mysterious ilike it. Ill follow it.
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Lin Lan
update please 🙏 😙
2022-06-24
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Lou
nice first chap, cant wait for more! do you happen to have any social media or fan page i can follow? :)
2022-06-24
0
PurpleChibis are awsome!
Love the title, its soo good looking. Id suggest a couple things though. First, can you see if you can paste what the characters look like? As in an image of them? Not comic wise per se but just give is readers as a heads up on what the characters look like in a bigger sense?
Second off, dont use a chat box and do quotes. I get it but it rather confuses me as to whats going on. Just write without the blurb on whats going on
Third off you need to introduce your characters. I have no idea who is who is master and all. But the first episodes very mysterious ilike it. Ill follow it.
2022-06-24
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