Loopholes in Equestria

*IN THE CASTLE*

[ What was that? Oh no, where's Spike?]

Twighlight ask. She felt then saw a sudden strike of vision. Her eyes turned white and there she saw herself falling into a hole. She felt like it was real. While falling, something was catching up with her.

[ AAAAHHHH!!!! GET AWAY FROM ME!!!]

She screamed in terror as she tries to flap her wings to get away from the creature.

[ AHAHAHAHA! Don't be afraid~ I'm not gon~na hurt you~ PRINCESSSSSSS~ AAAAAHHHH!]

This unknown creature tried to eat her. Its mouth was so stretched out that it could eat 3 dragons in one go. But fortunately for Twilight, she's faster than the creature. As she tries to fly down she saw a loophole on the side of... the... hole...? Yah, that's it. Another hole.😀

[ I need to reach that hole. But how? *inhales* That's it! I just need a little push. I hope this works.]

Twilight tried to get nearer to the creature. She tries to keep calm so that she could find her way out. However, as she turned around, she saw the full image of the creature. The creature was thrice as big as Amber's father, the retired Dragon Lord. Its face was oval and full of fur, its eyes were as red as the red sun, its mouth was cut in sideways, its tongue was cut in two with sharp mouth-like plants in its ends, and it has a body of a grizzly bear full of dead souls and skeletons screaming for help though it also serves as the creature's voice. She panicked! She thought it was the same size as a minotaur...BUT SHE WAS WRONG! It was actually so far from her trying to catch her and stop her from going anywhere. Gladly, a beam strike the beast that it was pushed back. Something pulled her into the hole she was trying to go into.

[ *sigh* Wait a minute...why can't I use my magic? *shocked* MY HORN! Wait! Where are we going? ]

[Twilight- Twilight wake up!]

[ Huh!? What? Where am I???]

[Twilight it's me, Apple Jack. You've been asleep for another 3 days again...What's goin' on Twi?]

[ *she covers her face* I don't know Apple Jack... Ever since I made the portal work I've been having nightmares lately...]

[ Yeah...about that. Twilight...? There is something you should know....]

[ What is it, Apple Jack?]

[ About the portal...ever since you fixed it, loopholes were appearing everywhere not just in Ponyville but also in the whole Equestria.]

[ How is that possible? The portal was half finished. Oh no, where's Spike? Apple Jack, where is Spike!]

[ Nyeah~ about that. Spike became an adult! And I was like HUUWWWHHHAAAATTTT???? and the others were like WHHHAAATTT??? and then iwhshbsjsjeishsbdidndid]

[ Pinkie what?]

[ Oh nothing! La la-la la-la la-la~ I'm glad you're awake Twi, La la-la la-la la-la~]

Twilight hurried to Spike's room. There she saw a bulk body of an adult dragon.

[Spike...? Spike, how did this happen to you...]

Twilight felt the guilt stabbing her so deep that it could put a whole because she thinks she's the reason why there's an imbalance in Equestria. She thinks it's her fault for everything that's happenning. As she hugs Spike, she felt him waking up so she sits on the side bench waiting.

*Spike POV*

[ Ahhh... w-where am I... o-ouch!]

He looked at the wound in his lower stomach. Spike still feel a little bit dizzy. but he can see Twilight sitting with a worried face.

[ Twilight? Oh, am I glad to see you? Aacckk!]

*3rd POV*

Spike screamed in pain as his wound is bleeding. His wound is still fresh and deep.

[ Spike, you shouldn't walk around too much, try to rest ok?]

She laid him back to bed carefully and let him rest for a while.

[Oh Twilight, darling~ I'm here~, I'm going in, okay?]

[Of course Rarity.]

Twilight saw the door opened and saw Rarity walking in and she brought goodies too.

[ Oh am I glad to see you awake my dear. I hope everything's alright. Do you feel weird or anything? Do you need anything my dear. ANYTHING!!!]

[ T-there's no need Rare... *grins*]

[Are you sure...]

[Yes, I'm sure]

[ Well then g- aahhhhh!!!*screams in high pitch*]

Yes, Spike stood up and hugged Rarity.

[S-spik-?hmp]

Spike gave her a deep kiss as he hugged her so tight. He kissed Rarity with compassion and it seems... that... Rarity felt.... it ...too... so... she... also...went on it... too... (°•°) As they both kissed, Rarity was so turned on, on Spike's muscular body that they kissed for a couple of minutes.Twilight was so dumbfounded that she can't move. Rarity on the other hand... She passed out.•-•

//That was a shocking kissing scene!!!>\< //

///And yes, Spike is an Adult dragon with a muscular body and Rarity is still a pony. You guys might think that they're real people like what they were on "Diamond Rogue" like yo! It was an awesome comic!!!!All of them were so pretty and sexy especially Rarity,Pinkie Pie, and Spike!!! ///

*//Okay,back to story.//*

But then Spike also passed out and Twilight had to carry them both and put them in bed(separately).

*AT THE BRIDGE OF DIMENSIONS*

[ How did you get here?] asked the tall figure.

[ I- I was sucked in by a portal.] Spike answered nervously.

[ What universe did came from or rather what reality did came from?]

[ Ha! You're crazy. What do you mean what universe hahaha you are so messed up hahaha]

[ I see... so what's your name?]

[I'm Spike, and you are...]

[ How are you in your universe? How's Twilight doing?]

[Well a little problem was going on and Twi-]

Spike was surprised when he realized that the tall figure talked about Twilight when he didn't even mentioned her to him.