ok lemme say something. the story plot is going amazing and everything is really good except the dialogues and the description looks AI generated. for example, the overuse of "that sounds _" or small descriptions of actions and thoughts that show hesitation but not exactly in the realistic way. I wouldn't imagine two people around me talking like that. This gives off a completely different vibe where the readers think of them as both characters only, erasing the realistic vibe. I hope you can understand what I'm getting at. A good use of stammering, exclamation etc would be nice and refreshing. However, if you want to go with this vibe again, it's the author's freedom and choice. But personally, the dialogues are feeling typical and similar.
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Syd
ok lemme say something. the story plot is going amazing and everything is really good except the dialogues and the description looks AI generated. for example, the overuse of "that sounds _" or small descriptions of actions and thoughts that show hesitation but not exactly in the realistic way. I wouldn't imagine two people around me talking like that. This gives off a completely different vibe where the readers think of them as both characters only, erasing the realistic vibe. I hope you can understand what I'm getting at. A good use of stammering, exclamation etc would be nice and refreshing. However, if you want to go with this vibe again, it's the author's freedom and choice. But personally, the dialogues are feeling typical and similar.
2026-06-01
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Rea Juli
this picture is everything🥺🥰
2026-05-24
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Neha Afreen
jealous taehung is really something 😂❤️👏
2026-05-24
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