I love you through my life but now I am wreck and you are gone
I like all the characters , plot twist is interesting to create different atmosphere , you should try giving back ground to your story I mean like novels describing eavh thing around there surroundings that will make your chat story look more beautiful, keep up , keep working hard and best of luck ,
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happy_ uni
😂😂
2022-03-20
0
otaku /army forever ( MTNP)
I love you through my life
but now I am wreck and you are gone
I like all the characters ,
plot twist is interesting to create
different atmosphere , you should
try giving back ground to your story
I mean like novels describing eavh thing
around there surroundings that will make your
chat story look more beautiful,
keep up ,
keep working hard and best of luck ,
Reader from mtn community
2020-07-12
2
Akira-kun
COMMENT! MY COMMENT
2020-07-08
1