hello,author! you story is variety and is pretty amazing! please keep writing! my favorite character is Tini she is super cool! but I have some suggestions! all chapters are too short, as a chat novel you have to make it longer that's all keep writing! thank you ~Reader from MTN community
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hello,author!
you story is variety and is pretty amazing!
please keep writing!
my favorite character is Tini she is super cool!
but I have some suggestions!
all chapters are too short, as a chat novel you have to make it longer
that's all
keep writing!
thank you
~Reader from MTN community
2020-07-12
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