your plot is interesting , I like all the characters, so far yes I am admiring it, well I just want to say that you need to brush up your skills your english is good , you have talent but lacks vocabulary , I like your hard work that you have put in keep it up and keep doing great ! best of luck .... so far no I haven't found any mistakes but the mistake that we all usually do are of punctuations I am also bad in it I didn't find any but I know experts will find it and they will correct it
so again best of luck
( READER FROM MTN COMMUNITY)
2020-07-13
1
[DEACTIVATED] kimchi
Their phone numbers are the same😂😂 Anyway good work keep it up!
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☆Mr.Handsome☆《MDC-H 》Boy
loving it
readers from MTN community ☺
2020-07-22
2
otaku /army forever ( MTNP)
your plot is interesting ,
I like all the characters,
so far yes I am admiring it,
well I just want to say that
you need to brush up your skills
your english is good , you have talent
but lacks vocabulary , I like
your hard work that you have put in
keep it up and keep doing great !
best of luck ....
so far no I haven't found any mistakes but
the mistake that we all usually do are of punctuations
I am also bad in it I didn't find any but I know experts will find it and they will correct it
so again best of luck
( READER FROM MTN COMMUNITY)
2020-07-13
1
[DEACTIVATED] kimchi
Their phone numbers are the same😂😂 Anyway good work keep it up!
2020-07-12
3