I really love your story and the way you wrote your characters intro. I like all the characters but I like Sophia the most because she is really simple and she is a bit like me. I really enjoyed your story and if possible you can put more pictures and there are some typing mistakes but there aren't any major mistakes.
~reader of MTN community
2020-07-12
2
_𝙰𝙻𝙴𝚇.𝙴𝚅𝙰𝙽𝚂_
I really like the way you wrote the story, spacially the intro about them, it's a different then other chat storys and funny too... nearly I like the every character of this story but I like most the character of the teacher, he's funny 😂... I enjoy the story most but there's some typing mistake, so try to correct them. moreover the story is too funny, keep it up
~reader of MTN Community
2020-07-12
1
[DEACTIVATED] kimchi
I really like this idea of first love here, it's interesting and also fun to read. I like Justin best because I find him super relatable, I can totally put myself into those shoes. I also like Sam though, he's super funny and reminds me of Ming. This story is super enjoyable, but maybe you could out more pictures. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes or spelling errors so far, keep up the good work!!👍👍
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I really love your story and the way you wrote your characters intro. I like all the characters but I like Sophia the most because she is really simple and she is a bit like me. I really enjoyed your story and if possible you can put more pictures and there are some typing mistakes but there aren't any major mistakes.
~reader of MTN community
2020-07-12
2
_𝙰𝙻𝙴𝚇.𝙴𝚅𝙰𝙽𝚂_
I really like the way you wrote the story, spacially the intro about them, it's a different then other chat storys and funny too... nearly I like the every character of this story but I like most the character of the teacher, he's funny 😂... I enjoy the story most but there's some typing mistake, so try to correct them. moreover the story is too funny, keep it up
~reader of MTN Community
2020-07-12
1
[DEACTIVATED] kimchi
I really like this idea of first love here, it's interesting and also fun to read. I like Justin best because I find him super relatable, I can totally put myself into those shoes. I also like Sam though, he's super funny and reminds me of Ming. This story is super enjoyable, but maybe you could out more pictures. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes or spelling errors so far, keep up the good work!!👍👍
2020-07-12
2