Episode 3

Someone MDC-P

woah! the story is very funny. It seems like a common popular theme but you're able to make it your own giving different vibes. I like how every character have their own unique personality and the author captured them nicely in their talk and behaviour within 3 chapters. I love Neha character. she's so funny drooling over boys😂😂😂 Honest.
Also you used misaki's pic for the lead and she matches perfectly with the original character too.
A small correction would be to rectify few grammatical mistakes. it's not noticeable at first but there were some... few actually.
Good going !!👍

Love Comics 💜

The story is clearly full of comedy. It's just awesome. Only 3 chapters and it makes me laugh so much.

The thing I like is the author being a part of the story and not not recognized by anyone 😆

My favourite became the cute fairy Hecate 😂 Well sometimes the wrong spell she speaks would be good for the FL in her love in future 😂😂

Everything is funny and alright. I don't have any dislikes about it

No. I don't find any grammatical errors

Well to say the truth. I feel like when you write the next line or dialogue in the middle something goes missing. Like the dialogue and scene is missing something and continues

But I literally loved the comedy part

~Reader from MTN~

Adi[MTN]

The story is just awesome author, I find no grammatical mistakes till now. Also, it's hard to write magical story But yeah it was really cool , I was imagining things real while reading it. Also, comedy in this story is well done and the chemistry going on is good with many characters.