Author's character is progressing into having her own story... That's good. The story pace had been steady... not very fast and not very slow. Love the way you insert gifs and pic.. it's giving live anime vibes. GRAMMAR!!😐 The stumbling plot had already been used... I feel like you could use new ideas to create those scenes instead of the same ones.
2021-03-06
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Love Comics 💜
It's funny and finally the ML entered but poor her again been accused of being a pevert
The plot of Neha being cheated but she stood up again and went into the abyss of her own story 😂
As always Hecate and now Neha also. Becoming stone 🙂
I liked every part. There is nothing to dislike
Nope there isn't any.
I have no suggestions 😌
Nothing
~Reader from MTN~
2021-01-08
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Adi[MTN]
Wow, Bijoy Came and saw photos which author kept 😂😂😂 But he mistaken it for Amoura and twist came was awesome that author become stone too nice going. And when she was saying To That invisible fly That Bijoy thought for himself now let's how he checks his bag , Really I loved this Story too much totally Unique plot awesome work done author.
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Author's character is progressing into having her own story... That's good. The story pace had been steady... not very fast and not very slow. Love the way you insert gifs and pic.. it's giving live anime vibes. GRAMMAR!!😐 The stumbling plot had already been used... I feel like you could use new ideas to create those scenes instead of the same ones.
2021-03-06
0
Love Comics 💜
It's funny and finally the ML entered but poor her again been accused of being a pevert
The plot of Neha being cheated but she stood up again and went into the abyss of her own story 😂
As always Hecate and now Neha also. Becoming stone 🙂
I liked every part. There is nothing to dislike
Nope there isn't any.
I have no suggestions 😌
Nothing
~Reader from MTN~
2021-01-08
0
Adi[MTN]
Wow, Bijoy Came and saw photos which author kept 😂😂😂 But he mistaken it for Amoura and twist came was awesome that author become stone too nice going. And when she was saying To That invisible fly That Bijoy thought for himself now let's how he checks his bag , Really I loved this Story too much totally Unique plot awesome work done author.
2021-01-05
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