the story the words are very good and dialogue are too perfect but expect the part he killed his lover its just not able to digest if he loved her would he be able to kill her it is not forgiving if that was not included the backstory of hero it could have been great can't able to sympathise with him here
2026-01-07
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Taekook fan
author you are so so good at words you deserve an Oscar ❤️
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the story the words are very good and dialogue are too perfect
but expect the part he killed his lover its just not able to digest if he loved her would he be able to kill her it is not forgiving if that was not included the backstory of hero it could have been great can't able to sympathise with him here
2026-01-07
0
Taekook fan
author you are so so good at words you deserve an Oscar ❤️
2025-12-17
1
Bunny 🐇
the way they opened up a bit is amazing
2025-12-17
1