Authy, I like this story. However I have noticed in all your stories in initial stages you write nicely then later you start making lots of grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, time stamps, etc. which gets really annoying for readers. It seems that you get bored and don't know how to continue, so pls work on this part as we readers also would like to enjoy a good story without so many errors.
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Angie
Authy, I like this story. However I have noticed in all your stories in initial stages you write nicely then later you start making lots of grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, time stamps, etc. which gets really annoying for readers. It seems that you get bored and don't know how to continue, so pls work on this part as we readers also would like to enjoy a good story without so many errors.
2025-12-20
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Devil kitty
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2025-12-29
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