author I am sorry if I will sound rude or harsh but........ I really want to say it that your story is good the plot is nice. But u need some serious grammar correction and sentence construction. And try to add more details and depth to the story the incidents are having veryyyy much incidentally.
Comments
Michi (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
author I am sorry if I will sound rude or harsh but........ I really want to say it that your story is good the plot is nice.
But u need some serious grammar correction and sentence construction. And try to add more details and depth to the story the incidents are having veryyyy much incidentally.
2026-01-20
4
Michi (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
please do something to it
Please 🙏🏻
2026-01-20
1
Sofia 💗
author update more episodes please fast 😞😞😞😞
2026-01-20
0