author what I miss at the story is when he is getting married nirved and his sister is also getting married as in the same day you should also includes some of the scene that he is also sad and cry like he went to her when she is getting ready and and like in vidaai you should so what some there see because in the book when they will like baby it was so sweet that the love the each other like no and so you should include that to so it will be like cute and happy but the overall stories fabulous I love the story I love the whole chapter and at the wedding I feel so sad that I was crying because of the scene where the parents came and talk with the daughters and in the kanyadan scene I was crying like hell but over all I love it do right this kind of story more because this is like so super like best❤️🥰❤️🥰😭😭❤️🥰❤️🥰
2026-04-22
2
𝓥𝓪𝓲𝓼𝓱𝓾~🐿🎀
Hey authy it's been a while.. I'm not commenting on your stories.. par abhi nahi kar sakti.. mere exams near hai.. competitive exams are really tough... apni studies ko prioritize kar rahi hu currently🥀😔 your hottipie really loves you and will be back after 2 months... I wanna resume the story badly.. I love all your stories.. I really do.. but abhi keliye control kar rahi hu apni urge.. Till then bye... 💞🎀 ( don't ask ki maine yeh sab kyu likha...kuch jyada hi loyal hu🎀✋😔)
2026-03-20
2
SANJANA _7
I just want to see how Nirved reacts after finding out Aryahi’s flashback story. I’m so excited it feels like mice are jumping in my stomach😋😋
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pia Chaudhary
author what I miss at the story is when he is getting married nirved and his sister is also getting married as in the same day you should also includes some of the scene that he is also sad and cry like he went to her when she is getting ready and and like in vidaai you should so what some there see because in the book when they will like baby it was so sweet that the love the each other like no and so you should include that to so it will be like cute and happy but the overall stories fabulous I love the story I love the whole chapter and at the wedding I feel so sad that I was crying because of the scene where the parents came and talk with the daughters and in the kanyadan scene I was crying like hell but over all I love it do right this kind of story more because this is like so super like best❤️🥰❤️🥰😭😭❤️🥰❤️🥰
2026-04-22
2
𝓥𝓪𝓲𝓼𝓱𝓾~🐿🎀
Hey authy it's been a while.. I'm not commenting on your stories.. par abhi nahi kar sakti.. mere exams near hai.. competitive exams are really tough... apni studies ko prioritize kar rahi hu currently🥀😔
your hottipie really loves you and will be back after 2 months... I wanna resume the story badly.. I love all your stories.. I really do.. but abhi keliye control kar rahi hu apni urge.. Till then bye... 💞🎀
( don't ask ki maine yeh sab kyu likha...kuch jyada hi loyal hu🎀✋😔)
2026-03-20
2
SANJANA _7
I just want to see how Nirved reacts after finding out Aryahi’s flashback story. I’m so excited it feels like mice are jumping in my stomach😋😋
2026-03-20
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