I don't support this fr, there should have been more time, they both didn't even know each other like truly, and he also kissed her forcefully, not even asking her will at first and now this, this is really not that engaging and truly it is actually scary, there should have been slow burn, proximity, tension, not like this, first marriage and then this, like no plot in side story, not disliking you author, I have read every story of yours and I liked each of them very much but when It is needed to share our opinion, so I am just sharing my opinion,
2026-02-07
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Nandini
aedan ka khada ho gya 🌚🌚
2026-02-07
8
Diana
yup...I am kinda not liking it and their trope either...its like he just says "I am yours" but at face value only...he is just manipulative and totally showing "you are mine" behaviour....he waited till marriage cause she said so..but made it clear that on wedding night doing it is must...like whether she is comfortable or prepared or not...no development of relation like texts, calls, letters, even flowers and dates..no trust and comfort...he just barges in and demands for proximity. well thats what i felt...I am kinda not liking this...not to offend my favourite author though 😅
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Vijay Shalini Dubey
I don't support this fr, there should have been more time, they both didn't even know each other like truly, and he also kissed her forcefully, not even asking her will at first and now this, this is really not that engaging and truly it is actually scary, there should have been slow burn, proximity, tension, not like this, first marriage and then this, like no plot in side story, not disliking you author, I have read every story of yours and I liked each of them very much but when It is needed to share our opinion, so I am just sharing my opinion,
2026-02-07
31
Nandini
aedan ka khada ho gya 🌚🌚
2026-02-07
8
Diana
yup...I am kinda not liking it and their trope either...its like he just says "I am yours" but at face value only...he is just manipulative and totally showing "you are mine" behaviour....he waited till marriage cause she said so..but made it clear that on wedding night doing it is must...like whether she is comfortable or prepared or not...no development of relation like texts, calls, letters, even flowers and dates..no trust and comfort...he just barges in and demands for proximity.
well thats what i felt...I am kinda not liking this...not to offend my favourite author though 😅
2026-02-08
5