author I don't know why u always end the story at most awaited moment only I am 100% sure that everyone want more of romantic moment on the story u always end either in marriage and right after that is kids we want the between moment
2026-02-17
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Bloody Queen
to be very frank i am quiet attach with this story and I don't really want it to end soon authy you can add some chapter showing ragini dad being punished and her mother being happy like some cute scenes and Daniel getting undisciplined a little anyways it's your story but still as a reader just my opinion
2026-02-17
1
authyyy y so recently in past two stories yu don't show most of chemistry between couples and rush at the end
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pika
author I don't know why u always end the story at most awaited moment only I am 100% sure that everyone want more of romantic moment on the story u always end either in marriage and right after that is kids we want the between moment
2026-02-17
11
Bloody Queen
to be very frank i am quiet attach with this story and I don't really want it to end soon
authy you can add some chapter showing ragini dad being punished and her mother being happy like some cute scenes and Daniel getting undisciplined a little
anyways it's your story but still as a reader just my opinion
2026-02-17
1
authyyy y so recently in past two stories yu don't show most of chemistry between couples and rush at the end
2026-02-16
5