The story up till now was great. No cliche plot or typical plot typo where they ML's are possessive and obsessed with the Mc's and capture them without their permission or the MC's despite all that they have done blush and fall in love without any self-respect. This story truly is good. Like the ML's try to understand them, respect their choices and decisions and wait like obedient boys (puppies๐คญ) and the MC's are not like timid and all. I first thought that ML's will try to possess them and MC's will accept it quietly but no ML's firstly did two or three things wrong given that they are mafias but when they realised they corrected it (like yeah mistakes done again and again is not forgivable so let's see what they will do in the future). The MC's also didn't shiver under the cold tones like timid porcelain boys. I literally liked when the elder twin shouted at them and protected his brother. Also , the younger twin is so cute and sweet, I like him too. And their small crazy talks made me laugh for so long and I felt warmth spreading in my heart. The story is great up until now so please continue doing such beautiful works in the future too. Author. I really appreciate you writing this story and I hope the ML's cherish them and don't hurt them. I will also like the twins to have a proper understanding of the ML's , take their time understanding and learning about them and then fall in love after clearing all their doubts and being fully ready. โจโบ๏ธโจโจโจ
2026-03-30
1
Secret
Of course there will be hope for them, they both are so sweet and cute . I want them to be happy. The first one will be a typical plot but I will not mind it too as I want them to find the twins as soon as possible and as for the second one if he tried that then I will be very happy to see his torture scenes. โบ๏ธ
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Secret
The story up till now was great. No cliche plot or typical plot typo where they ML's are possessive and obsessed with the Mc's and capture them without their permission or the MC's despite all that they have done blush and fall in love without any self-respect.
This story truly is good. Like the ML's try to understand them, respect their choices and decisions and wait like obedient boys (puppies๐คญ) and the MC's are not like timid and all. I first thought that ML's will try to possess them and MC's will accept it quietly but no ML's firstly did two or three things wrong given that they are mafias but when they realised they corrected it (like yeah mistakes done again and again is not forgivable so let's see what they will do in the future). The MC's also didn't shiver under the cold tones like timid porcelain boys. I literally liked when the elder twin shouted at them and protected his brother. Also , the younger twin is so cute and sweet, I like him too. And their small crazy talks made me laugh for so long and I felt warmth spreading in my heart. The story is great up until now so please continue doing such beautiful works in the future too. Author. I really appreciate you writing this story and I hope the ML's cherish them and don't hurt them. I will also like the twins to have a proper understanding of the ML's , take their time understanding and learning about them and then fall in love after clearing all their doubts and being fully ready. โจโบ๏ธโจโจโจ
2026-03-30
1
Secret
Of course there will be hope for them, they both are so sweet and cute . I want them to be happy.
The first one will be a typical plot but I will not mind it too as I want them to find the twins as soon as possible and as for the second one if he tried that then I will be very happy to see his torture scenes. โบ๏ธ
2026-03-30
1
Dr . nene
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2026-03-30
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