I really am liking your story, Author. Like it's wonderful. โจ I once read a story of the same type a long time ago ... It had twins and three mafia too but it was so not satisfying like seriously. It said the twin had a sharp tongue and was tough but whenever the moment came in the story they always showed the typical 'scared of cold voice" scene. It even had a s*x scene where the older twin was blackmailed by them that they will tell something to his brother, like seriously? If they really loved them then they would never do it and secondly I was shocked that the older twin was willing to sleep with them but not tell his own brother about it.๐ Also, they fall for them without any efforts from the other side like does it even make sense? It was frustrating and I was thinking why right tough in the introduction if you are going to be like this ???? ๐
2026-04-05
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BTSโค๏ธ
no plz dnt change ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐i really luv ur story
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I really am liking your story, Author. Like it's wonderful. โจ
I once read a story of the same type a long time ago ... It had twins and three mafia too but it was so not satisfying like seriously. It said the twin had a sharp tongue and was tough but whenever the moment came in the story they always showed the typical 'scared of cold voice" scene. It even had a s*x scene where the older twin was blackmailed by them that they will tell something to his brother, like seriously? If they really loved them then they would never do it and secondly I was shocked that the older twin was willing to sleep with them but not tell his own brother about it.๐ Also, they fall for them without any efforts from the other side like does it even make sense? It was frustrating and I was thinking why right tough in the introduction if you are going to be like this ???? ๐
2026-04-05
1
BTSโค๏ธ
no plz dnt change ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐i really luv ur story
2026-04-05
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YURI
authyyy u are sooo caringgggg๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ญ
2026-04-30
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