Chapter 4 — The First Hook

After breakfast, Qin Yue went back to her room.

She sat cross-legged on the bed and began to meditate.

She didn’t care about her novel’s performance at all.

But the system did.

After holding back for a long time, it finally asked,

“Do you want to check your story’s stats?”

“No,” Qin Yue replied calmly.

System: “……”

It had been ready to report the terrible results—

Zero readers.

Zero bookmarks.

Zero comments.

But just then…

It detected something.

“There’s a comment!” the system shouted excitedly.

“Too bad we can’t see it yet—it’s still under review!”

“Oh,” Qin Yue responded lightly.

“Go check your author's dashboard!” the system urged.

Qin Yue didn’t move at first.

Last night, when she wrote that chapter…

She wasn’t trying to gain readers.

She was setting a trap.

At the banquet, she had clearly seen something others couldn’t.

That little boy beside Victor Su.

No one else noticed him.

Because he wasn’t… alive.

That was why she wrote that scene into her story.

If everything went as she expected—

Someone would come.

Qin Yuan loved mocking her.

And Qin Yuan knew Su Nuanuan.

So there was a high chance…

That girl would read it.

Of course, Qin Yue wasn’t certain.

It was just a guess.

But that didn’t matter.

She had thrown out the bait.

Whether anyone took it…

Didn’t concern her.

Meanwhile, the system was far more anxious than her.

Unable to wait any longer, Qin Yue finally opened the author dashboard.

The comment had been approved.

The system read it eagerly—

Then froze.

“This… this is too much!” it exploded in anger.

“How dare they say something like this?!”

Qin Yue glanced at it calmly.

No reaction.

The comment was harsh.

Calling her story trash.

Mocking everything.

But to her…

It didn’t matter.

“I’m going to track their IP!” the system raged.

“I’ll find out who this is!”

“That’s illegal,” Qin Yue said lightly.

The system went silent.

Then muttered,

“Even if they don’t like it… they don’t have to insult it like this…”

Qin Yue closed the page.

“Once you post something publicly, anyone can comment,” she said.

“If it crosses the line, report it.”

“If not… ignore it.”

System: “……”

For a moment, it felt worried.

Can someone this calm really write a satisfying revenge story?

Qin Yue didn’t care.

She closed her laptop…

And continued meditating.

Time passed slowly.

Meanwhile, downstairs—

Qin Yuan was starting to panic.

He had just received a message from Su Nuanuan.

Her father…

Was coming over.

Qin Yuan immediately realized something was wrong.

No matter how careless he usually acted…

He knew this was serious.

If a big figure like Victor Su came to visit—

And only he was home?

That would be disrespectful.

He quickly called Qin Rong.

“Dad, Uncle Su is coming to our house!”

Qin Rong was stunned.

The Qin and Su families weren’t close.

So why would he suddenly visit?

When he heard the reason—

His expression darkened.

“Qin Yue again…”

At first, when they found their real daughter…

He had felt a little guilty.

But after she returned—

Causing trouble again and again—

That guilt disappeared.

In his eyes, reputation was everything.

And Qin Yue?

She only embarrassed the family.

This time…

She had even provoked Victor Su.

Unacceptable.

“It’s time to teach her a lesson,” he said coldly.

Just then, Qin Yuan sent him a link.

Qin Yue’s novel.

Qin Rong opened it immediately.

At first, he read with a frown.

Then slowly…

He became focused.

When he read about her adoptive parents…

He paused.

When he read about his wife…

His expression softened slightly.

When he read about himself being handsome…

He unconsciously relaxed.

But when he saw the part about strange men looking at her—

His face darkened.

Who dared to do that?

Then he read about his eldest son.

Calling her “not very smart.”

Qin Rong frowned.

That was too much…

No matter what—

She was still his daughter.

As for the girls fighting over clothes—

He ignored it.

But suddenly—

He noticed something strange.

“Why isn’t Qin Yuan mentioned?”

He kept reading.

Completely absorbed now.

For the first time…

He felt like he was seeing his daughter’s thoughts clearly.

It was… unfamiliar.

But interesting.

Then—

He reached the final part.

His expression changed instantly.

“She’s gone too far!”

Even if Victor Su had secrets—

What right did she have to write about it?!

“She really has no sense!” he muttered angrily.

The car sped up.

Soon, it entered the villa.

Even before getting out—

Qin Rong saw another car parked outside.

The Su family’s car.

His expression turned serious.

He adjusted his suit and walked inside.

But when he entered the living room—

He froze.

Only Qin Yuan was there.

“Where is Mr. Su?” he asked.

Qin Yuan pointed upstairs.

“I don’t know… he went straight up to find Qin Yue.”

Father and son exchanged a look.

Both felt something was wrong.

Upstairs.

In the reception room.

Qin Yue sat calmly on the sofa.

Wearing simple beige clothes.

Holding a cup of tea.

Her movements were slow and elegant.

Across from her—

Su Nuanuan quietly observed her.

The last time she saw Qin Yue…

She looked thin, dark, and uneasy.

But now—

She was completely different.

Her skin was fair.

Her expression calm.

Her presence… distant.

Even her beauty seemed sharper.

More refined than Lina Qin’s.

“Did you come to see me?” Qin Yue asked calmly.

Only then did Victor Su realize—

He had rushed here too impulsively.

He didn’t know how to start.

So Su Nuanuan spoke first.

“Sister Qin Yue… did you write Diary of the Elite?”

“Yes.”

“The last part… about my dad…”

“Was that real?”

“Yes.”

The answer came without hesitation.

Su Nuanuan’s heart tightened.

Victor Su couldn’t hold back anymore.

“Miss Qin…”

“Can you describe that child?”

His voice trembled slightly.

Qin Yue looked at him.

Then spoke slowly.

“Black cotton pants.”

“On the left knee… a cartoon print.”

“White shoes.”

“With rainbow stripes.”

Victor Hale’s hands began to shake.

“Anything else?” he asked urgently.

“A mole.”

“On his right ear.”

Silence.

Then suddenly—

Victor Su broke down.

“It’s him…”

“It’s really him…”

His voice shook violently.

“He called me ‘Dad’…?”

He covered his face and cried.

Su Nuanuan stood frozen.

She didn’t understand anything anymore.

What was going on?

Meanwhile, Qin Yue sat calmly.

As if she had seen this many times before.

After a while, Victor Su finally calmed down.

“I’m sorry,” he said hoarsely.

“I lost control.”

Qin Yue nodded.

“It’s natural.”

He took a deep breath.

Then looked at her seriously.

“Miss Qin…”

“Since you can see him…”

“Can you help me?”

“I’m willing to pay anything.”

Su Nuanuan blinked in confusion.

Help? Pay?

What is happening right now?

Even the system whispered,

“What does he mean?”

Qin Yue smiled faintly.

She lifted her teacup.

Then said calmly—

“I’m sorry, Mr. Hale.”

“I’m just a writer.” 🔥

Episodes
1 Chapter 1 — Rebirth & The Writer System
2 Chapter 2 — First Reader… and First Shock
3 Chapter 3 — When Fiction Becomes Truth
4 Chapter 4 — The First Hook
5 Chapter 5 — Money, Attention… and Something More
6 Chapter 6 — The Truth Revealed in the Night
7 Chapter 7 — The Search Begins
8 Chapter 8: The Truth Beneath the Banyan Tree
9 Chapter 9: The Words That Became Reality
10 Chapter 10: Doubt Turns Into Fear
11 Chapter 11: A Visitor with Hidden Darkness
12 Chapter 12: The Truth Behind the Ghost
13 Chapter 13: The Truth Everyone Refuses to Believe
14 Chapter 14: A Visit Filled with Secrets
15 Chapter 15: A Choice Between Revenge and Rebirth
16 Chapter 16
17 Chapter 17
18 Chapter 18
19 Chapter 19
20 Chapter 20
21 Chapter 21
22 Chapter 22
23 Chapter 23
24 Chapter 24
25 Chapter 25
26 Chapter 26
27 Chapter 27
28 Chapter 28
29 Chapter 29
30 Chapter 30
31 Chapter 31
32 Chapter 32
33 Chapter 33
34 Chapter 34
35 Chapter 35
36 Chapter 36
37 Chapter 37
38 Chapter 38
39 Chapter 39
40 Chapter 40
41 Chapter 41
42 Chapter 42
43 Chapter 43
44 Chapter 44
45 Chapter 45
46 Chapter 46
47 Chapter 47
48 Chapter 48
49 Chapter 49
50 Chapter 50
51 Chapter 51
52 Chapter 52
53 Chapter 53
54 Chapter 54
55 Chapter 55
56 Chapter 56
57 Chapter 57
58 Chapter 58
59 Chapter 59
60 Chapter 60
61 Chapter 61
62 Chapter 62
63 Chapter 63
64 Chapter 64
65 Chapter 65
66 Chapter 66
67 Chapter 67
68 Chapter 68
69 Chapter 69
70 Chapter 70
71 Chapter 71
72 Chapter 72
73 Chapter 73
74 Chapter 74
75 Chapter 75
76 Chapter 76
77 Chapter 77
78 Chapter 78
79 Chapter 79
80 Chapter 80
81 Chapter 81
82 Chapter 82
83 Chapter 83
84 Chapter 84
85 Chapter 85
86 Chapter 86
87 Chapter 87
88 Chapter 88
89 Chapter 89
90 Chapter 90
91 Chapter 91
92 Chapter 92
93 Chapter 93
94 Chapter 94
95 Chapter 95
96 Chapter 96
97 Chapter 97
98 Chapter 98
99 Chapter 99
100 Chapter 100
101 Chapter 101
102 Chapter 102
103 Chapter 103
104 Chapter 104
105 Chapter 105
106 Chapter 106
107 Chapter 107
108 Chapter 108
109 Chapter 109
110 Chapter 110
111 Chapter 111
112 Chapter 112
113 Chapter 113
114 Chapter 114
115 Chapter 115
116 Chapter 116
117 Chapter 117
118 Chapter 118
119 Chapter 119
120 Chapter 120
121 Chapter 121
122 Chapter 122
123 Chapter 123
124 Chapter 124
125 Chapter 125
126 Chapter 126
127 Chapter 127
128 Chapter 128
129 Chapter 129
130 Chapter 130
131 Chapter 131
132 Chapter 132
133 Chapter 133
134 Chapter 134
135 Chapter 135
136 Chapter 136
137 Chapter 137
138 Chapter 138
139 Chapter 139
140 Chapter 140
141 Chapter 141
142 Chapter 142
143 Chapter 143
144 Chapter 144
145 Chapter 145
146 Chapter 146
147 Chapter 147
148 Chapter 148
149 Chapter 149
150 Chapter 150
151 Chapter 151
152 Chapter 152
153 Chapter 153
154 Chapter 154
155 Chapter 155
156 Chapter 156
157 Chapter 157
158 Chapter 158
159 Chapter 159
160 Chapter 160
161 Chapter 161
162 Chapter 162
163 Chapter 163
164 Chapter 164
165 Chapter 165
166 Chapter 166
167 Chapter 167
168 Chapter 168
169 Chapter 169
170 Chapter 170
171 Chapter 171
172 Chapter 172
173 Chapter 173
174 Chapter 174
175 Chapter 175
176 Chapter 176
177 Chapter 177
178 Chapter 178
179 Chapter 179
180 Chapter 180
181 Chapter 181
182 Chapter 182
183 Chapter 183
184 Chapter 184
185 Chapter 185
186 Chapter 186
187 Chapter 187
188 Chapter 188
189 Chapter 189
190 Chapter 190
191 Chapter 191
192 Chapter 192
193 Chapter 193
194 Chapter 194
195 Chapter 195
196 Chapter 196
197 Chapter 197
198 Chapter 198
199 Chapter 199
200 Chapter 200
201 Chapter 201
202 Chapter 202
203 Chapter 203
204 Chapter 204
205 Chapter 205
206 Chapter 206
207 Chapter 207
208 Chapter 208
209 Chapter 209
210 Chapter 210
211 Chapter 211
212 Chapter 212
213 Chapter 213
214 Chapter 214
215 Chapter 215
216 Chapter 216
217 Chapter 217
218 Chapter 218
219 Chapter 219
220 Chapter 220
221 Chapter 221
222 Chapter 222
223 Chapter 223
224 Chapter 224
225 Chapter 225
226 Chapter 226
227 Chapter 227
228 Chapter 228
229 Chapter 229
230 Chapter 230
231 Chapter 231
232 Chapter 232
233 Chapter 233
234 Chapter 234
235 Chapter 235
236 Chapter 236
237 Chapter 237
238 Chapter 238
239 Chapter 239
240 Chapter 240
241 Chapter 241
242 Chapter 242
243 Chapter 243
244 Chapter 244
245 Chapter 245
246 Chapter 246
247 Chapter 247
248 Chapter 248
249 Extra Part 1
250 Extra Part 2
251 Extra Part 3
252 Extra Part 4
253 Extra Part 5
254 Extra Part 6
255 Extra Part 7
256 Extra Part 8
257 Extra Part 9
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Chapter 1 — Rebirth & The Writer System
2
Chapter 2 — First Reader… and First Shock
3
Chapter 3 — When Fiction Becomes Truth
4
Chapter 4 — The First Hook
5
Chapter 5 — Money, Attention… and Something More
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Chapter 6 — The Truth Revealed in the Night
7
Chapter 7 — The Search Begins
8
Chapter 8: The Truth Beneath the Banyan Tree
9
Chapter 9: The Words That Became Reality
10
Chapter 10: Doubt Turns Into Fear
11
Chapter 11: A Visitor with Hidden Darkness
12
Chapter 12: The Truth Behind the Ghost
13
Chapter 13: The Truth Everyone Refuses to Believe
14
Chapter 14: A Visit Filled with Secrets
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Chapter 15: A Choice Between Revenge and Rebirth
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Chapter 16
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Chapter 17
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Chapter 18
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Chapter 19
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Chapter 20
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Chapter 21
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Chapter 22
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Chapter 23
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Chapter 24
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Chapter 25
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Chapter 26
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Chapter 27
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Chapter 28
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Chapter 29
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Chapter 33
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Chapter 39
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Chapter 40
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Chapter 44
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Chapter 45
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Chapter 53
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Chapter 55
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Chapter 56
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Chapter 203
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Chapter 207
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Chapter 208
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Chapter 209
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Chapter 210
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Chapter 212
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Chapter 213
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Chapter 214
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Chapter 215
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Chapter 216
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Chapter 217
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Chapter 218
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Chapter 225
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Chapter 244
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Chapter 245
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Extra Part 1
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Extra Part 5
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Extra Part 7
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Extra Part 9

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