The Story of the Commander Redo

The Story of the Commander Redo

Introduction.

In a galaxy called the Andromeda Spiral, there were 9 planets ruled by a president called Duke Stain and his wife Nana. Together, they had a child called Symphony 5 years. There were prime ministers in the nine worlds which humans had conquered and each were specialized in something. The nine planets are: Phychist, Veneran, Imperium, Acquarium, Exorcist, Debralanche, Cataclysm, Uranus and Inanimate. They all practiced martial arts using technology and had levels : Beginner, Foundation, Apprenticeship, Physic,Meridian mending, core formation, Body development, Infantry, Nirvana and the Realm of Mysteries which only one, Duke Stain had achieved. The other Prime ministers were stuck at Nirvana with no hope of development. There was a rare phenomenon of the existence of mental masters and there were only ten discovered led by Duke Stain, his daughter, the child of the prime minister of Exorcist called Maple and others. They had all agreed to let Debralanche the training grounds for their soldiers and children for all the conditions present on the other planets were there. There were enemies with unknown powerful masters who always attacked them using undead bodies and condensed souls. They have been trying to identify them but to no avail From their frequent attacks, at first, they were at a great loss but with time , they slowly developed and managed to fight them. Their joined best army consisted of 100 soldiers with 7 mental masters. Mental masters were valued due to their telekanisis ability, long range fighting ability and mental disturbance also, on reaching a certain level, they could control one's soul but after years of dedicated practice. Practicing martial arts could also increase longevity but to a max of 500 years however, mental masters could reach 1000 years on peak dedicated practice but this was rare for even Duke Stain was only sure of 700 years. The worlds were specialized as follows each suplimenting the other establishing a symbiosis in battle and living basics: Physic- Body building and heavy armoured machinery used for mining and heavy duty in battle.

Veneran - poisons and computer viruses used mostly in battle to slow the bodies or disintegret their poisons chemically. Imperium - exoarmours used in actuel combat, and all purpose bots and spacecrafts.

Acquarium - water based technology with flexible suits robots, spacecrafts and planning.

Exocist- inceneration weapons and research on soul control.

Debralanche - teaching and music technology with its influence on the souls.

Cataclysm - Medicine which mainly focuses on how to counter the enemy's poison and soul protection.

Uranus - Spacial technology which deals with transportation through teleportation and integrated weapons and suits with Spacial abilities.

Inanimate - this is where animals were put of all species and of developing species in a large magnificent confined space. They worked on genetically developing new species more powerful and adaptable they also worked on animal robots to train their beasts and for battle purposes.

All these planets had their own rulers with Imperium being the capital where Duke Stain dwelt. Mental masters had only 10 discovered levels theoretically with the highest level practisionaire being Duke Stain at level 7 with the least at level 5. In Imperium just like all the other planets everything was uniquely mesmerizing from their cars, building, their general planet colour, arrangement and transportation lines. Humans and robots passing on the roads but the bot's purpose was only to direct the humans when needed. However prestigious the planet was, they failed to manage one major part, there was an island where the poor, some old and disabled were stationed. The only problem was that not every disabled and old were there but only a few for reasons best known by Duke Stain. There was a boy 5 years in class on the island. The building was rusty and had outgrowths, their desks were made of scrap metal but moderately maintained, they used tablets provided by the school through the mercy of their ruler. The boy was answering a question from the teacher but a certain girl objected his answer giving a better refined answer making the boy's answer an insignificant attempt. He accepted that positively and was enlightened, happy but not angry which annoyed the girl but did nothing for the time being. Teaching and learning continued were they were taught some basic robotics, maths and languages. They did some assembling of robot parts till they were dismissed later in the afternoon at around 1 pm with a homework of making a robot model from scrap. The boy's name was Learmar, the girl went to him when he was packing, pushed him while he was packing and threw his bag which wasn't in good shape either way and asked him how he felt of the sweet defeat with the whole class backing her up. Learmar kepth quiet on the floor and the girl told him to never think about answering a question in class for he wasn't qualified and only she was qualified. Some boys then went and beat the crap out of Learmar leaving him with a swollen eye and they later left with the girl. He later stood not , he never cried nor made any compliment but kept quiet, for his father told him that tears were only for the dead. He packed his things and went limping a little. On the way, he met a lot of some young and old farmiliars and also picked up some scrap on the way. He went to a certain workshop after crossing a border which separated the island in two with one part representing the city with some buildings and better living conditions and the other part which was dominated by large piles of trash, broken electronics, plastics and in the deeper parts, there were lakes of nuclear matter which sometimes resulted to very toxic rainfall and fogs. The workshop was rusty with the owner being an old man specialized in robotics. He put his bag down on a table on the front part of the workshop and went through a door to his garage where he was working on a robot arm, he was trying to get his wrench but Learmar ran fast and handed it over to him. He was happy to see him but on seeing his purple eye, he sighed and asked him if he wanted some tips on dealing with the girl bullying him as he continued fixing the arm. Learmar said that that was nothing and changed the topic to his homework. The man respected his choice and talked of his project as he continued with his work telling him how to do it in the process, expanding his horizons. After finishing his work, they started on Learmar's project , he took out all the equipment they would need. Learmar knew all of them and their purposes due to his frequent visits to the workshop. He was told that the first step was to make a plan which was surprisingly hard and not what he was pictured. The man told him that it was because of exposure. He first needed to think of the bod he needed to make under which, he should consider the functions of the bot. The next step was to draw it like a commander commanding every part to its position after figuring out it's core. Since Learmar was only making a model which was like a shell, he asked the man if shells also needed cores in which he was answered with a yes. Also, he said that it was the most important for from the shells, can a bot take form however, the other vital part was the mother board where all the functions were installed.

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