Okay now I can say it's going to be interesting 🤣 Btw I am damn curious to know Ml's Name
2021-02-09
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this story is pretty nice...Your plot is amazing as well and how you convert it as your on style and according to your taste is amazing .....Fl is my faviourate character but i have to say she is quite caresless.........there is some grammatical mistakes try to avoid it and well try to give better names to characters well it is just suggestion don't mind it you don't like it
Reader From Mtn Community~
2021-01-11
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
The story is pretty nice...U r using the plot quite well...I lived the character of female lead.You have some typing mistakes in the story...try to avoid them so the readers will like to read it and if u use short forms then tell the eeaders in a note about their full forms so that tge readers can get know about your writing style well
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Okay now I can say it's going to be interesting 🤣 Btw I am damn curious to know Ml's Name
2021-02-09
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this story is pretty nice...Your plot is amazing as well and how you convert it as your on style and according to your taste is amazing .....Fl is my faviourate character but i have to say she is quite caresless.........there is some grammatical mistakes try to avoid it and well try to give better names to characters well it is just suggestion don't mind it you don't like it
Reader From Mtn Community~
2021-01-11
2
☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
The story is pretty nice...U r using the plot quite well...I lived the character of female lead.You have some typing mistakes in the story...try to avoid them so the readers will like to read it and if u use short forms then tell the eeaders in a note about their full forms so that tge readers can get know about your writing style well
~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-01-11
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