Okay big thing is here I love Fl's character quite dramatic 🤣and the story is very funny too donno about others
2021-02-09
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well so far your story is really amazing.... i like Fl character .....and i am feeling mystery in air 😅😅.....you wrote well and maybe fl is from high class family but she herself don't know it is just thinking not sure but it's ok as i will know about it when i read further.....quite intersting story have to say it
Reader from Mtn Community~
2021-01-12
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
You are making the chapters a bit too long..There's so much to read in one episode only..So try to make them short...Like giving cliffhangers so that readers will get eager to read earlier and I'll again say try to avoid typing mistakes.
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Life✿
Okay big thing is here I love Fl's character quite dramatic 🤣and the story is very funny too donno about others
2021-02-09
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well so far your story is really amazing.... i like Fl character .....and i am feeling mystery in air 😅😅.....you wrote well and maybe fl is from high class family but she herself don't know it is just thinking not sure but it's ok as i will know about it when i read further.....quite intersting story have to say it
Reader from Mtn Community~
2021-01-12
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☆Gauri☆MTNp☆Inf☆
You are making the chapters a bit too long..There's so much to read in one episode only..So try to make them short...Like giving cliffhangers so that readers will get eager to read earlier and I'll again say try to avoid typing mistakes.
~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-01-11
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