Memories
You are the memories that I don’t want to lose, memories that I want to be my treasure but what if were not destiny to each other.
I am just a girl who dream about being loved to one person who is special to me. A simple girl who want to appreciate by other people. I meet a guy who I want to be there for a rest of my life. He always wait for me, he didn’t get angry with me. I said to him I want to go to Festival with him so he agree but there’s many things he need to complete a requirements, he said to me “wait for me”. This is my first time waiting for him. I just got surprised.
Him: wait for me at festival. I be there for you.
Me: yeah, I will wait for you. Be safe! I love you!
I looked at him as he walked away for me, ever second I miss him but he was going home and he also needed a break so I went home too.
*Festival*
I so happy to see him, I’m very excited.
I wait for him an hour but he didn’t come, I call him but he didn’t answer but someone calling me, it’s his brother. His brother said “he got accident”, my tear drop that I didn’t know and I drop my phone, I run faster to the hospital.
I didn’t know to do, to say, to think, I just stare at the patient, sleeping quietly. That’s not the point I am crying, the doctor said that my boyfriend lost his memory. Why this happening to me?? *crying*
When he wake up, he just stare at me, he has a cold eyes and he just have a creepy face, I don’t know why I am scared, I’m his girlfriend I want to tell him but I don’t want to push him to make his memory back. He always make his face cold when I’m speaking to him but the other is not. We are walking with his brother then he accidentaly pushed a woman and he suddenly smiled, it’s my first time seeing him smiling but not for me but the other girl. Two months, his brother tell me I need to go home because I’m very stressed but that is my biggest mistake, my boyfriend and that girl make friendship and it was fast that they already lover, I cry. I don’t want to lose him. I went to hospital and I see him laughing at the girl he loves, I suddenly went outside so no one seeing me crying, did he just forget to love me or he just give up to his memory back. I don’t want to let go of you but if that is what he makes him happy, I let go of you.
Me: See you next my love
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Comments
𝗟𝗜𝗡° ᵐᵐᵈᶜ-ᵗ 📝
sad
2021-05-03
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𝗟𝗜𝗡° ᵐᵐᵈᶜ-ᵗ 📝
yeah, so toching
2021-05-03
2
Night🇪🇬🇯🇵
Well, I'm not sure I'm the one you'd love to hear his opinion on your story, but here's what I'm going to say...
First, the story is beautiful, but its events are very fast, you had to write its events slower with the addition of a lot of details and excitement that make your story very realistic and cruel since it is a sad love story, I suggest that you use the harsh pattern in telling the story to show feelings honestly..
In addition, you lack grammatical correction, I understand what you intend to tell in your story in a big way but you really lack grammatical and linguistic correction, the problem is that you write words correctly but not Right,I suggest you ask for the help of an English teacher and review what you write, but if it's hard, I'm here.
I help friends with linguistic and grammatical correction in their novels, so if you need help I'm here, and also continue to do great work....
I will be happy to help you, and I want to thank you for these beautiful ideas in writing the novel, I will follow it anyway...
2021-05-03
1