dear authy, by saying few improvements is... try to express, explain their feelings,the situation..u concentrate too much on the conversation, if we don't know the place, if we don't feel the emotions, if we can't feel how they are chatting, if we can't imagine while reading... story becomes dull. not only these.. don't try to use words that are unusual and difficult, learn culture of that language, English culture, don't take my words wrong if u misunderstood something just write okey? I don't want to create misunderstandings between fan and author 😊
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dear authy, by saying few improvements is... try to express, explain their feelings,the situation..u concentrate too much on the conversation, if we don't know the place, if we don't feel the emotions, if we can't feel how they are chatting, if we can't imagine while reading... story becomes dull. not only these.. don't try to use words that are unusual and difficult, learn culture of that language, English culture, don't take my words wrong if u misunderstood something just write okey? I don't want to create misunderstandings between fan and author 😊
2025-12-22
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