authy, yes really need improvement.. as i said u concentrate too much on conversation ..no that doesn't mean u should shorten them, instead just add the description of places, the emotions they are feeling and write every episode from someone's POV -point of view, like sometimes only write from Fl pov, bute when needed write the way Ml thinks,his pov. i think u do understand know.
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°☯DARKforestofurmind☯°mmdc-t🖌
*couldn't believe his ears* means he hasn't expected such answer from her
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°☯DARKforestofurmind☯°mmdc-t🖌
authy, yes really need improvement.. as i said u concentrate too much on conversation ..no that doesn't mean u should shorten them, instead just add the description of places, the emotions they are feeling and write every episode from someone's POV -point of view, like sometimes only write from Fl pov, bute when needed write the way Ml thinks,his pov. i think u do understand know.
2025-12-22
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°☯DARKforestofurmind☯°mmdc-t🖌
*couldn't believe his ears* means he hasn't expected such answer from her
2025-12-22
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