As I was reading I felt this is how 'men' think and write. Then I went ahead and I checked the profile, it turned out to be true. There is no disrespect to your writing as the story telling skill is really good but at the same time you're justifying that cheating is okay as long it's not s**ual which is wrong. The ML saying that if FL would have cheated he would forgive her that's bull cuz when she was abused earlier he didn't believe in her and started doubting. FL is naive and that's okay but pls give her some character arc and not her be manipulated by her so called husband and friends.
2026-01-13
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°☯DARKforestofurmind☯°mmdc-t🖌
well.. author u sure love getting all negative comments~ i guess there's something planned ahead, well ur writing style is good, BUT there's but the mindset of girls doesn't work like that~
2026-01-16
2
dove....
au much?dude absolutely he loves her ..he adores the ground she walks on..he loves his wife so much he can't see her uncomfortable so he went ahead and had sex with someone else..which he latter realized was just a lie
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Angie
As I was reading I felt this is how 'men' think and write. Then I went ahead and I checked the profile, it turned out to be true. There is no disrespect to your writing as the story telling skill is really good but at the same time you're justifying that cheating is okay as long it's not s**ual which is wrong. The ML saying that if FL would have cheated he would forgive her that's bull cuz when she was abused earlier he didn't believe in her and started doubting. FL is naive and that's okay but pls give her some character arc and not her be manipulated by her so called husband and friends.
2026-01-13
8
°☯DARKforestofurmind☯°mmdc-t🖌
well.. author u sure love getting all negative comments~ i guess there's something planned ahead, well ur writing style is good, BUT there's but the mindset of girls doesn't work like that~
2026-01-16
2
dove....
au much?dude absolutely he loves her ..he adores the ground she walks on..he loves his wife so much he can't see her uncomfortable so he went ahead and had sex with someone else..which he latter realized was just a lie
2026-01-23
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