I’m enjoying the story, but I wanted to point out a contradiction regarding the mana system. Victor states that powerful mana is golden and humans lack it, while Lucas claims it is purple/red and that humans use blue mana. This inconsistency makes the world-building confusing; it might be worth clarifying these rules for your future writing!
2026-06-28
1
vampire
but how can she be powerful than dragons ?
is purple more powerful then red ? or is it like red -- purple -- green . and red is the most powerful?
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Luna
I’m enjoying the story, but I wanted to point out a contradiction regarding the mana system. Victor states that powerful mana is golden and humans lack it, while Lucas claims it is purple/red and that humans use blue mana. This inconsistency makes the world-building confusing; it might be worth clarifying these rules for your future writing!
2026-06-28
1
vampire
but how can she be powerful than dragons ?
is purple more powerful then red ?
or is it like red -- purple -- green .
and red is the most powerful?
2026-03-12
1
wish
thx for update author
waiting for next update
2026-01-14
2