Author, I genuinely thought you'd do something different this time instead of following the same old storyline where an innocent, naive girl loses her innocence because of a trash male character and then eventually ends up settling with him.
If Rajveer is manipulating Arya as part of a bigger plan, I can understand that. But I don't think Rajveer should abandon Swarna in the process. Throughout the story, he has always cherished, protected, and cared for her like the most precious person in his life. It wouldn't feel right for him to suddenly leave her to deal with everything on her own.
More than anything, I want to see Swarna choose herself for once. She deserves growth, independence, and a life where her happiness isn't determined by the men around her.
2026-05-31
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xvi.xi
why author? why evertime we keep expectations that this time you wont arrange a couple by tarnishing a girl's character and you do the exact opposite to our expectations. I thought this time atleast there won't be a marriage based on this situational responsibility. what kind of animosity do you have with female characters that you only show them as weakling. there was only one female character in your whole story collection and that is Angel and every other is shown dominated by others.🤬
2026-05-31
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sofia
I am not able to understand why everyone judging authy story too much . as the story is started you not even know what happens to sawrna as there is no marriage fixed why everyone assumes that she will end up with Arya or authy repeated the plot it is just Swarna just know truth you donot know how this story will end up . so just wait in patience and see how it proceed. instead judging story early . and authy pls update 💕💕❤️🥺
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CYRA
Author, I genuinely thought you'd do something different this time instead of following the same old storyline where an innocent, naive girl loses her innocence because of a trash male character and then eventually ends up settling with him.
If Rajveer is manipulating Arya as part of a bigger plan, I can understand that. But I don't think Rajveer should abandon Swarna in the process. Throughout the story, he has always cherished, protected, and cared for her like the most precious person in his life. It wouldn't feel right for him to suddenly leave her to deal with everything on her own.
More than anything, I want to see Swarna choose herself for once. She deserves growth, independence, and a life where her happiness isn't determined by the men around her.
2026-05-31
29
xvi.xi
why author? why evertime we keep expectations that this time you wont arrange a couple by tarnishing a girl's character and you do the exact opposite to our expectations. I thought this time atleast there won't be a marriage based on this situational responsibility. what kind of animosity do you have with female characters that you only show them as weakling. there was only one female character in your whole story collection and that is Angel and every other is shown dominated by others.🤬
2026-05-31
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sofia
I am not able to understand why everyone judging authy story too much . as the story is started you not even know what happens to sawrna as there is no marriage fixed why everyone assumes that she will end up with Arya or authy repeated the plot it is just Swarna just know truth you donot know how this story will end up . so just wait in patience and see how it proceed. instead judging story early . and authy pls update 💕💕❤️🥺
2026-05-31
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