I like the story very much especially mermaids and mixing 2 ideas in a story is awesome till now I like the FL very much but the chapters are too short you should make them bigger author
~Reader from MTN
2021-01-08
1
โGauriโMTNpโInfโ
The story line is good. I liked the way you mixed 2 ideas in one story. I thought of telling my favorite character here but I didn't really get any grip of any chracter by now. Your explaining is a bit confusing and chapters are short. In my opinion you should make your chapters a bit bigger and enhance your explaining skills.
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I like the story very much especially mermaids and mixing 2 ideas in a story is awesome till now I like the FL very much but the chapters are too short you should make them bigger author
~Reader from MTN
2021-01-08
1
โGauriโMTNpโInfโ
The story line is good. I liked the way you mixed 2 ideas in one story. I thought of telling my favorite character here but I didn't really get any grip of any chracter by now. Your explaining is a bit confusing and chapters are short. In my opinion you should make your chapters a bit bigger and enhance your explaining skills.
~~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-01-08
1
แดแดแด ๊ฐแดแดษชสy'๊ฑ สแดแด แดสy แดสษชสแด (แด แด )
all realms looks great
2020-12-31
1