The story is going good and I like the FL the most she is very bold and caring but I still felt a lil bored reading make it more fun add some comedy and stuff to make it more fun to read and chapters are too short try to make it bigger
~reader from MTN
2021-01-08
0
โGauriโMTNpโInfโ
After reading the story till here I finally have some grip of the characters including in the story.I like female lead's kind character.The storyline is going good but it isn't that much interesting or addictive to read. I think you should give some effort in making it more interesting and try enhancing your explaining skills.
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The story is going good and I like the FL the most she is very bold and caring but I still felt a lil bored reading make it more fun add some comedy and stuff to make it more fun to read and chapters are too short try to make it bigger
~reader from MTN
2021-01-08
0
โGauriโMTNpโInfโ
After reading the story till here I finally have some grip of the characters including in the story.I like female lead's kind character.The storyline is going good but it isn't that much interesting or addictive to read. I think you should give some effort in making it more interesting and try enhancing your explaining skills.
~~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-01-08
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แดแดแด ๊ฐแดแดษชสy'๊ฑ สแดแด แดสy แดสษชสแด (แด แด )
update soon sis ๐๐๐
2020-12-31
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