The story is going good I like it very much with pretty pics and all but the story is kinda confusing and there are some grammatical errors hope you will work on them
~reader from MTN
2021-01-08
1
โGauriโMTNpโInfโ
The story line is going in a good way...I am liking the way you mixed the two plots and developed a nice story. You are having some typing mistakes and your explaining is not literally very well...I don't really feel that your sentences are quite enhanced or in other words I wanna say that It don't have a good way of explaining. The sentences kind of feel a bit odd without any full stops, comma etc. I hope that you'll work on your explaining skills!
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The story is going good I like it very much with pretty pics and all but the story is kinda confusing and there are some grammatical errors hope you will work on them
~reader from MTN
2021-01-08
1
โGauriโMTNpโInfโ
The story line is going in a good way...I am liking the way you mixed the two plots and developed a nice story. You are having some typing mistakes and your explaining is not literally very well...I don't really feel that your sentences are quite enhanced or in other words I wanna say that It don't have a good way of explaining. The sentences kind of feel a bit odd without any full stops, comma etc. I hope that you'll work on your explaining skills!
~~~Reader From MTN Community
2021-01-08
1
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2020-12-31
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