Dear author @kris, I know it's your story and you can write anything you want. But the thing which is bothering me is, I find this story quite similar to Angel and Lorenzo. Both Angel and Ariella are the daughter of their father's first wife. Both of them have siblings. Both Angel and Ariella had a fiance chosen by their father. Both are captives of ml. Both are attracted to their enemy, who want revenge from the girl's family. Both Angel and Ariella submit themselves to their enemy on their own will. Angel's one of the fingers gets chopped whereas Ariella's hand gets a minor cut. Lorenzo's uncle feels that he is getting distracted by Angel and same with Ivan, his brother Dimitri feels Ivan is getting distracted. and many more......
I am not writing this to offend you author, I love all of your stories. But I can't stop myself from finding the similarities.
2025-12-19
17
aditi
I think he manipulated her to give in , so that he can have her willingly.... because even fl little sister Sara was not trained any self defence and she herself was not demanding anything from her father so how can its her father fault when she herself was silent and so I think ivan took advantage of this and he played with her brain.... and here is the result she actually give in her v card ... seriously how can you get that comfortable with your nemesis 🤔🫡
2025-12-19
1
Moon
at this point I am not even liking arellia's decision...like hell do with domenico but it is your own self respect and dignity which you are playing with.
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Leyla
Dear author @kris,
I know it's your story and you can write anything you want. But the thing which is bothering me is, I find this story quite similar to Angel and Lorenzo.
Both Angel and Ariella are the daughter of their father's first wife.
Both of them have siblings.
Both Angel and Ariella had a fiance chosen by their father.
Both are captives of ml.
Both are attracted to their enemy, who want revenge from the girl's family.
Both Angel and Ariella submit themselves to their enemy on their own will.
Angel's one of the fingers gets chopped whereas Ariella's hand gets a minor cut.
Lorenzo's uncle feels that he is getting distracted by Angel and same with Ivan, his brother Dimitri feels Ivan is getting distracted.
and many more......
I am not writing this to offend you author, I love all of your stories. But I can't stop myself from finding the similarities.
2025-12-19
17
aditi
I think he manipulated her to give in , so that he can have her willingly....
because even fl little sister Sara was not trained any self defence and she herself was not demanding anything from her father so how can its her father fault when she herself was silent and so I think ivan took advantage of this and he played with her brain.... and here is the result she actually give in her v card ... seriously how can you get that comfortable with your nemesis 🤔🫡
2025-12-19
1
Moon
at this point I am not even liking arellia's decision...like hell do with domenico but it is your own self respect and dignity which you are playing with.
2025-12-19
5