MY! PERSONAL! OPINION! NO! OFFENSE! The story is all good ....BUT it feels like it's only revolving around Skylar and Trevor.. The thing which makes a story good is different ideas mixed together in a perfect blend. The story "you're the one I love" is a masterpiece. It has the perfect blend of friendship, love featuring mainly two couples, detailed character sketch of every character, plot twist and some funny and sweet moments that can make us smile like an idiot.
But this story has only one thing which is Skylar and Trevor. This just makes it boring and kinda uninteresting.
2021-05-19
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F/SWEET😊16
You are the best author , this chapter was awesome
2021-05-18
0
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"they are playing a game where the winner was already declared" you got me their👍 that was idk what to say that just made my day i guess😅😅 that is a great line i must say author... thanks for the update🤗
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MY! PERSONAL! OPINION! NO! OFFENSE!
The story is all good ....BUT it feels like it's only revolving around Skylar and Trevor.. The thing which makes a story good is different ideas mixed together in a perfect blend.
The story "you're the one I love" is a masterpiece. It has the perfect blend of friendship, love featuring mainly two couples, detailed character sketch of every character, plot twist and some funny and sweet moments that can make us smile like an idiot.
But this story has only one thing which is Skylar and Trevor. This just makes it boring and kinda uninteresting.
2021-05-19
1
F/SWEET😊16
You are the best author , this chapter was awesome
2021-05-18
0
...
"they are playing a game where the winner was already declared" you got me their👍
that was idk what to say that just made my day i guess😅😅 that is a great line i must say author...
thanks for the update🤗
2021-05-18
0