This was... an episode. Alot of sitting around and doing nothing. The reveal felt kinda unearned. It had build up, but still felt bland, simillar to the forest in the last episode. I recommend you practice or work on them. You could try hyper analysing your favourite story and figure out how they are as good as they are. (That's what I do.)
It's not all bad tho. You did do all the characters excellently this episode. I wish other characters like Valli Amma had actually interacted with Anya and Velan. I love their banter so much.
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Mellord 🌸🎶
This was... an episode. Alot of sitting around and doing nothing. The reveal felt kinda unearned. It had build up, but still felt bland, simillar to the forest in the last episode. I recommend you practice or work on them. You could try hyper analysing your favourite story and figure out how they are as good as they are. (That's what I do.)
It's not all bad tho. You did do all the characters excellently this episode. I wish other characters like Valli Amma had actually interacted with Anya and Velan. I love their banter so much.
Good chapter, just the worst one till now.
2026-01-04
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