bro. This chapter was peak. In the fight, each member did their thing and no-one felt overshadowed. Also,what were the guards doing. The fight was very one sides. A line like," Tens of guards charged towards our direction, just to be stopped by the beast. Catching the right of such a monster, their confidence fades away, but still they choose to fight. The little beast jumped to the face of one and started scratching. Another guard tried to hit it with his blade, but the creature jumped up, dodging the attack which ended up hitting the first guard." But I'm just being picky. One of the best ones yet. Keep it up.
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Mellord 🌸🎶
bro. This chapter was peak. In the fight, each member did their thing and no-one felt overshadowed. Also,what were the guards doing. The fight was very one sides. A line like," Tens of guards charged towards our direction, just to be stopped by the beast. Catching the right of such a monster, their confidence fades away, but still they choose to fight. The little beast jumped to the face of one and started scratching. Another guard tried to hit it with his blade, but the creature jumped up, dodging the attack which ended up hitting the first guard." But I'm just being picky. One of the best ones yet. Keep it up.
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