yo? Peak? Best chapter yet. Firstly, two people resting upon some grass with the sky as their blanket. How beautiful of a scene it is. You really can write romance can't you. The quiet conversation excellently shows the character personalitilies and humanizes them from the literal semi gods the last chapter showed. They're in love your honor. Plus this chapter is a great build up chapter. I can already see Anya and Velan having an argument sometime in the near future. Also, love their dynamic. Quick question: Do you plan to add character traits, for eg, only speaking in plural, often times using broken English, etc etc.
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Mellord 🌸🎶
yo? Peak?
Best chapter yet. Firstly, two people resting upon some grass with the sky as their blanket. How beautiful of a scene it is. You really can write romance can't you. The quiet conversation excellently shows the character personalitilies and humanizes them from the literal semi gods the last chapter showed.
They're in love your honor.
Plus this chapter is a great build up chapter. I can already see Anya and Velan having an argument sometime in the near future. Also, love their dynamic. Quick question: Do you plan to add character traits, for eg, only speaking in plural, often times using broken English, etc etc.
2026-01-13
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